Thursday 20 October 2016

Story by Annette Smith Illustrations by Richard Hoit

Story by Annette Smith Illustrations by Richard Hoit
 
Harry went to the Warehouse with his mum. He went to look at the toys. He saw a blue robot in a box. The robot waved at Harry.
Posted by at

2 comments:

  1. Jessie B GMS27 October 2016 at 09:38

    Kia Ora Jordan
    Great blog post I think that the part when the robot waved was pretty cool. next time you could work on putting another sentence in. What was your favorite part of the book? This reminded me of my 30bc posts.
    Ka Pai (good work)
    From Jessie

    ReplyDelete
  2. Unknown15 November 2016 at 09:14

    Kia Ora Jordan,
    It's Ayesha here. Your book sounds quite good I like the part where the robot waved at harry is quite cool. Maybe next time you could add a little more information about the book. What would you rate this book.
    From Ayesha

    ReplyDelete

Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)